Have you thought of any story?

Fictional or Historical Fiction. I got a few myself.

Sorry, what are you asking exactly?

Do you mean stories we created ourselves?

https://shop.lecturium.nl/boek/3112/voda-and-norwath--a-stone-of-the-world

Jup! Haha! Used to write a lot of fantasy stories when I was a kid.

Birdman:Yes!

Royta/Raeng:Cool! It's nice to see that you got your work in a book!

I was flunking school so my parents took away my videogames, so I decided to just write stories. I have a few other books that I never published or never finished, same with comic-book concepts. What about you man?

I haven't completed anything physically aside from a few comics I made. These days it just goes to my head. I got multiple stories in my mind since I was 9. I'm not good with naming btw and I haven't given them official names.

I made up Hydroblade, Rioclot, Electroman, Marko The Assassin, Nadsters, Iceman, The story where it is Ghostbusters but with a sword, A puzzle space story, Roboduck, and currently the story of an undead samurai.

I used to draw characters based on my friends at school. They would usually be about fighting the teachers and everyone had weird powers and dead teachers would return as cyborgs.

I created some other characters when I left school, mainly because my friends would come over and want to see more that nonsense.

Was never good at stories though. All I could come up with is 'here's a bad guy kill him'.

I forgot to mention the one story of cliche characters with their own worlds coming to a tournament to get their wish granted.

Same Birdman, hell my first little book was all about me and my friends as fantasty characters. I remember drawing them as knights, princesses and more haha. Ton of fun!

> I forgot to mention the one story of cliche characters with their own worlds coming to a tournament to get their wish granted.
https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Tournament_of_Power
I'd sue them!

LOL but the plot isn't exactly like that.

Ok looking back on the 1st, 6th, and 8th posts now, makes it look like more than a few.

You want to be a writer later Nadster, or anything related to that?

Yeah. I always liked to share what I can come up with. Mostly I want to make my own video games. I even thought of making my own "B-console" though that would mean I would have all of that stuff to myself.

Making your own console is pretty heavy coding work, how old are you anyway Nadster? If you want to see someone make his own system from scratch, googling up "Terry A. Davis" and his system "TempleOS" is pretty eye-opening. Guy made everything. Really cool to read!

19 years old. Thanks!

Got a bright future ahead of you dreaming so big! I remember I used to dream about where I am today, making bad gaming-magazine layouts in Word and drawing ugly as hell comicbooks. And here I am, ten years later. Keep dreaming big Nadster!

Has anyone ever played RPG Maker?

Nadster wrote:Fictional or Historical Fiction. I got a few myself.

Extremely late here lol but how is it going with stories?
I can't for the life of me start writing nor drawing even if I have lots of stories I wanna explore stuck in my head.

Golden_GustVerse wrote:

Nadster wrote:Fictional or Historical Fiction. I got a few myself.

Extremely late here lol but how is it going with stories?
I can't for the life of me start writing nor drawing even if I have lots of stories I wanna explore stuck in my head.

Well, not good as I find myself rather busy lately. However, I usually take my time planning my story out. Finding myself redoing the characters as I would feel the original roles were unnecessary. That said, I do feel that my stories are pretty basic. Not to mention that looking at some of my writing, I don't describe things. Think of it like this: Here is everything you need to know. Good? Good.

Nadster wrote:Well, not good as I find myself rather busy lately. However, I usually take my time planning my story out. Finding myself redoing the characters as I would feel the original roles were unnecessary. That said, I do feel that my stories are pretty basic. Not to mention that looking at some of my writing, I don't describe things. Think of it like this: Here is everything you need to know. Good? Good.

Even basic stories can be compelling, not to mention is that they are good for practicing in finishing stories.

Personally I struggle with actually putting words on page. When the story in your head you get so many affordances like no need to delve into details. When typing I suddenly feel pressured to add more details because it is evident that I can't convey my story clear enough.

I have lots of ideas, especially Cyber-punk but ficional kung-fu and Chinese medicine are real.
You see, tao-ism is their essencial philosophy. There is yin-yang principal, with five elements(water - metal - earth - fire - wood). If you have played Wu-long, you see that there is an "effective" elements to others (like water wins fire, metal wins wood etc etc).

So, In near future, there is a world that fictional tao-ism is real so they made a new augumentation from chinese medicine principal. And you can augument two elements at once so make it possible to another consequences(like, you have metal + fire augs, then you can use electronic powers).

But this is a just "world-building", so how about story? What about protagonist?

HERE IS WHERE GTP COMES IN.

This is what GTP made

"This is a world dominated by five major corporations according to the yin-yang theory of the five elements. There is five elements augs, with carefully customised for people whose "natural" elements are. The main character, who is on "wood" aug, working at a "wood" corporation. But he joined the resistance group after meeting a mysterious girl, who is on "Fire" aug(As a note, "wood"  generates/developes "fire" in taoism, lol).

The protagonist initially refuses to join the resistance, but joins the resistance after his master is murdered by another corporate assassin. The resistance group had executives for Fire/Water/Metal/Earth augs, so it was perfect for the main character to join.

That coporations trailed the main character, So they can invade the resistance fighter base. A big fight breaks out and each company sends their special forces. When resistance were on the defensive, they suggests that hold an old-fashion one on one dual, five times in row, on real-time broadcast. (I don`t know what GPT logic was, but) Coporations accepted that.

They are almost equivalent, but in the end, the resistance loses in final battle. Though, That was not a problem anymore. Because the secret of cyborg technology is revealed. The cyborg’s five element system was not built around natural five elements, but was against them. And these augs will make people sick in a long term, so corps can sell more meds for augs. The company that created this augs on the first place, was the "wood" company. The protagonist knew that his master`s death was also fake, so he invades into his corp and defeat the company's control for good sake."

I think that this is a decent for my idea, and so keep it for future work.

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And I also thought about M.D.house but exocism. Like there is a team of specialists for exocism. A catholic priest, A Buddist(with Hinduism knowledges) monk, A Northern druid, A Japanese miko and A "street excosist" who is familar with urban legneds. They are all outsiderds from their origin, and a bit quilky personality but with good heart. I assume that the "M.D.House"(=A leader) will be fit into "a street excosist", who is only an ass-hole but having a most brilliant brain on the team. So, In every episodes, They get a request from a "patient" and argue which "treatment" is better for this "symtomps". I would not write this, thoug. Not because this idea isn`t compelling enough, but this needs so many researches for making "case"s intersting.

p.s. If you wanna make this ideas flesh or tweak, Then just do it. Even you can ignore creditting me. These are just brain-storming not an actual work. I would like to write those on my own, but there is always limitation. I have other projects but I will keep them with myself, not like these. Because they are on actual writing process, and much more personal to me so I wanna have legal I.P. whether it would be successful or not, haha.

>GTP story. Looks like a normal action movie plot to me, fun idea though. You can go deeper with a philosophy or politics of the 5 element system though and it will match Deus Ex aha.

>2nd one is gonna be really tough to sort. Try practicing episodic storytelling that you don't have to share, just have fun with them. Helps fleshing out characters from what I heard and give blueprint for real stories.

>Flesh or tweak ideas. We all have ideas, so keep them. No, it's not because I don't like them, rather that I have my own that I am very attached to. But if you simply want discussing how to progress these ideas, message me anytime, I find this fun.